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likeasouffle ([identity profile] likeasouffle.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] misqueue 2012-08-12 03:23 am (UTC)

OMG. That was excellently done. I'm always so impressed by the way you fit everything in with canon and remember all the different threads, like Sam living at Kurt's house, and that Joe was the one who said Kurt could go to the God Squad meeting etc. I loved the scene at the beginning with the clothes, and Blaine and Kurt being too sexy for their own good. The way Blaine got quiet during the NYADA conversation was perfect. And Kurt's reaction to Dave's suicide attempt was heartbreaking, especially:

"No, Dad. He's--" Kurt swallows, but his throat still feels too tight for air. "He's in hospital. He tried to--" Kurt breaks off with a sob, sways against the door frame as his knees go numb. His temple hits the hard edge of the wood trim, and Kurt closes his eyes.
Then his Dad's hands are on his shoulders; his Dad's voice is close and suddenly soft, cracking with worry. "Kurt, buddy--"
"He tried to kill himself," Kurt whispers. The tears are welling up in his eyes now, making his vision swim and his eyelashes tangle and clump as he tries to open his eyes. It feels like there's a steel box around his heart, and it's far too small. His chest hurts. He can barely expand his lungs for enough air. His breaths are jagged, useless spasms.


Aaaugh, so moving. Great chapter!

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